Many writers face problems and issues when writing, especially myself. My biggest problem, I feel, is specifically talking about individual claims in points in their own paragraphs. For example in my rough draft of project 2 I talk about all of UNE’s yearly themes in one paragraph. In my final draft I dedicate a paragraph to each of UNE’s four themes for each year and compare them to my ideas with Ungar Scheuer. I also struggle with providing enough of my own opinion in my work, and also compared to others’ work which is much easier to include. My peers have mentioned to me before about adding more of my opinion and I continue and will continue to work on it in the future.
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