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UNE is very keen on making sure they provide a well rounded and enriched informative education for their students. Within the applied exercise major there are many introductory classes that teach the history and traditions of its specific courses. In intro to psychology, for example, students learn about the history and the evolution of psych (AES UNE). There are many other introductory courses as well in the major that provides students with the knowledge of the history and traditions of the courses, and therefore the major too. Most importantly, however, there is an introduction to applied exercise science course (AES UNE). The major of AES consists of the little bits and pieces, which are the courses, that are the building blocks of the major. AES is somewhat the liberal arts major in the sciences. AES is the liberal arts major of the sciences due to the fact that it encompasses many different fields such as: nutrition, physical therapy, occupational therapy, strength and conditioning, and much more (AES UNE). However, even though it is an enriched major and falls under all four “metagenres,” there is still more to the major that expand its richness. As AES involves communication, it also involves the technical side of education. It can be difficult to have an enriched technical major due to that it is mostly formulas and codes. Except, AES requires students to work with technology and science to diagnose and serve clients.

The revision looks into the side of a critic who might discuss how enriched majors don’t include the maths and sciences. However, AES is a science major that is enriched and includes liberal arts values.